opus2: last minute adjustment before publication of the link - tgtimes - The Gopher Times
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Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2021 20:42:34 +0000
opus2: last minute adjustment before publication of the link
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Is this name familiar to you? Maybe you encountered
\fIcirosantilli\fR on a StackOverflow or remembered one of the iconic
-provile picture he chose ? Did you encountered the name on GitHub? If
+profile picture he chose? Did you encounter the name on GitHub? If
so you may have immediately noticed how he weaponized this popular code
hosting platform into a freedom of speech silver bullet against China's
censorship.
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.PP
The entire user profile was turned into a long document that can
-resist the most ferocious censorship. A vast amount of images and
+resist to the most ferocious censorship. A vast amount of images and
keywords censored by China is published straight on the front page,
-making it outstanding to the curious visitor.
+making it outstanding to the visitors.
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.PP
-Would china dare to try take down the biggest code hosting platform,
+Would china dare to try to take down the biggest code hosting platform,
harming most of IT companies in the world? And even if it tries, would
it succeed? And so without provoking too much tension with the U.S.?
.
.PP
-While China's government censorship of its own violence is world famous,
+While China's government censorship violence is world famous,
so is GitHub's DDoS mitigation services (provided by a dedicated company,
-not performed by GitHub itself), after undertaking 1.3 Terabit per second
+not performed by GitHub themself), after undertaking 1.3 Terabit per second
during a famous DDoS attack.
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.PP
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Or maybe you are interested in one of the many computer-related topics he
teaches on its website?
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-This activist doubled as student and teacher might catch you down the
+This activist doubled as student and teacher might take you down the
rabbit hole of both computer science and fight for freedom.
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.DS