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HTML Author: Josuah Demangeon <me@josuah.net>
Date: Thu, 27 Jan 2022 21:09:11 +0100
opus3: improve wording, thanks IanJ
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@@ -4,18 +4,18 @@ Heaven and computers
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Before the era of smartphones, laptops, before Windows and Apple,
there were pioneers who took the fun of computers from the hands
-of the the few who could afford computers, and shared them massively
+of the few who could afford computers, and shared them massively
so that mere individuals could afford it.
.
.PP
-An ocean of creativity sprout. Art of all kind were made on these
-new toys, that were permitting to many to try on its own, or enjoy
-a tune of 8-bit music, a demo scene, a play of video game, an ASCII
+An ocean of creativity spread. Art of all kinds were made on these
+new toys, that were permitting many to try on their own, or enjoy
+a tune of 8-bit music, a demo scene, play a video game, ASCII
art...
.
.PP
Offering these pioneers a one-way ticket to enter the legend,
-8bitlegends.com builds a corner of peace, making some room into our
+8bitlegends.com builds a corner of peace, making some room in our
heart for the 8bit heroes.
.
.DS