More on rapid story writing[1]; or, my experience this month
with it.

My brother and  I went back-and-forth on the  outline a bit.
The story concept I churned out, it would seem, was a just a
tad too  abstract. In  my effort to  keep the  setting ultra
simple  for  illustration  sake,  I made  it  a  little  too
difficult to visualize.

We worked  through it  though, and  he seems  to be  OK with
moving forward without changing anything in the concept.

Multiple people working together  creatively is a challenge.
In  this particular  case,  where we  are  connected in  the
project yet working  on two quite separate  parts, the issue
might  be  that neither  one  of  us  really wants  to  have
creative responsibility for the entire project.

But, this is only a test,  and so I think the ultimate goal-
to learn- will be achieved.

[1] gopher://circumlunar.space:70/0/~tfurrows/phlog/akz_quickStory.txt